Beware of Spoilers!
Heroine (Harper): annoying
Hero (Max): ok
Cheating: h went on a date with OM after fucking H
Triggers: h heard H have sex with OW
Average score: 1/5
Best Line: “I pitied any girl dumb enough to fuck Max King. Which, apparently, included me.”
Worst Line: “My father had gotten my mother pregnant and then refused to do the right thing and marry her.” – why would it have been the ‘right’ thing to do?
The h was one of the most annoying, bitchy heroines I have ever come across. Poor Max. DNF’d at chapter 7.
- I get that the h has daddy issues but I didn’t want her falling for the H because he is older
- Urgh…teenage girls
- It annoyed me that I didn’t know what the age difference was between them
- Why do romance authors do this to us?! I NEVER find it attractive to listen to a guy that I like having sex with another woman so why would any heroine like that? Leave it out of the story!!!
- The h’s decision making process was annoying
- This completely describes the h: “Jesus, woman, you go from zero to sixty in a millisecond.”
Message to the h: